Revise the passage below so that it maintains a formal style and tone throughout.
Passage
Most fine arts classes, including visual art, music composition, dance, theater, and
creative writing, feature a peer-review component in which students provide feedback on
their classmates' work. Some art teachers maintain that peer review is a valuable
teaching tool that not only helps student artists reimagine their work but also pushes
student critics to develop their taste and technical vocabulary. The thing that's wrong
with this is that sometimes people give really lame feedback and don't get how to be
nice. When that happens, feelings can be hurt, and the peer-review process can become
unproductive.

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As I saw his eye lash, I dared him to speak again. I dared him to lash out at me again. "I will not. I have learned my lesson." I walked away, thinking about his eye lash that started this whole argument.  

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I think its C. Im almost 100% sure but like not all the way.

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The guiding question 1 of the article "Putting Good Deeds in Headlines May not be So Good", is

"What do the stories mentioned in the text have in common?"

Answer: Ordinary people went out of their way to help others.

Explanation:

"Putting Good Deeds in Headlines May not be So Good" is an article written by Tovia Smith. In her article, she explores the thought whether publicizing of good deeds is good or bad. She claims that people ought to do what they do as their duty and not as an extraordinary thing.

The stories shared by Smith in her articles share a commonality in the way they all went out of their way to help those in need. Under the rubric of "A Series of Good Deeds", Smith shares some of the 'good deeds' publicized by people and showing that how they went out of their way to help others.

Therefore, "Ordinary people went out of their way to help others" is the correct answer.

Answer:

Revised laws, just leaders, unwavering support— this is how we restore peace and end segregation.

Explanation:

The em dash or long dash is one form of punctuation in grammar that has been confused and even mixed with the en dash, hyphen, etc. It has also been majorly replaced in its usage in a sentence by the comma, parenthesis, or even the semi-colon.

In the given sentence, the em dash will be used. This is so that the first part of the sentence "revised laws, just leaders, unwavering support" is the list of points that the sentence is trying to make. And the em dash will emphasize them while also separating them in the same manner.

Thus, the correct answer is option B.

Answer:

-- B on PLATO

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Q1. Indirect    Q2.  The parts of which the prson discribes what happened. "I chipped my tooth. I cut my lip. I scraped my knee. I hurt my hip. I pulled my shoulder, tweaked m ear, and got a bruise upon my rear I banged my elbow, barked my shin."  

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Usually, the athour would start off with saying the title with the work and end with saying it too.  

Answer:

Question 1. Indirect

Question 2.  the person describes what happened. "I chipped my tooth. I cut my lip. I scraped my knee. I hurt my hip. I pulled my shoulder, tweaked m ear, and got a bruise upon my rear I banged my elbow, barked my shin."  

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If this was real i would really feel bad for this kid

RIP

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There are a few inconsistencies between the two records in Genesis 1 and 2, for example, the request for when creatures and people were made: Genesis 1 - it expresses that creatures, lastly people, were made on day six. Beginning 2 - it infers that people were made before creatures.

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Answer:

The dragonfly moves very quickly.

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I took the test

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The dragoon moves fast

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took test

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By over-harvesting, deforestation, ecosystem degradation, the invasion of exotic species through hunting, as well as other forces, humanity can trigger the extinction of an ecosystem. Changes such as these have responsible for climate change, soil degradation, air pollution, and water shortages.

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I would recommend Hades, Greek aides ("The Unseen"), also called Pluto or Pluton ("The wealthy one" or "The giver of wealth"), in ancient Greek religion, god of the underworld Hades was a son of Titans Cronus and Rhea the brother of deities Zeus, Poseidon, Demeter, Hera, and Hestia. He is one of the most powerful greek gods along with his brothers

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3.analysis

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Long format journalism usually presents articles with many words and that in addition to exposing the facts of a given situation, they spend considerable time showing an analysis of these facts. Short format journalism also presents facts and transitions, but as it presents smaller articles, it tries more to show what happened, without presenting any analysis.

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The answer is: 3. analysis

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These are the times that try men's souls

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He also adds that "if being bound in that manner is not slavery, then there is not such a thing as slavery on earth.

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making the class laugh constantly

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the first one

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It means that she literally ran away from the supervisor, flying like a bird.

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This question is about "The People Could Fly," which tells the story where a portion of African slaves taken by force to America managed to use their own bodies to fly. This made it possible for these slaves to escape the terrors of slavery, flying over fences and overgrowers who tried unsuccessfully to arrest them. In this case, the phrase "She flew like an eagle" means that the girl flew, like a bird, using her own body.

Answer:

B. annoyance

Explanation:

i did the test

In the passage written by C. Safos from the extract adopted by barnacles, the author is trying to show annoyance. Thus, option B is correct.

Barnacles are water-living beings they are usually found in salt water, and they get attached to any surface. They are mostly found on whales, crabs, ships, or turtles.

In this passage, it is said that Eugenion a coworker has been telling his repeated stories to the author and because of that he is getting annoyed, and it is also taking lots of time.

The author tells that how many times  had heard the same story

Also in total, he has heard all these stories 3487 times, and he needs to pick up the work, and he is feeling annoyed that Eugenion has stuck to him like a Barnacle. Therefore, option B is the correct option.

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Answer:

yes

Explanation:

why because not ever needs the same thing as that other person has

We must respect the rights of American Indians would most likely be made by someone against Manifest Destiny. Therefore, the correct option is option B.

A 19th-century American cultural idea known as "manifest destiny" held that American immigrants were destined to colonize all of North America. While discussing American foreign policy inside the early 19th century, historian William Weeks wrote:

the belief in the nation's divinely predestined destiny to achieve in this mission, the assumption of the United States' superior moral goodness, and the argument that it has a duty to redeem the globe through the extension of republican government and, more broadly, the "American way of life." We must respect the rights of American Indians would most likely be made by someone against Manifest Destiny.

Therefore, the correct option is option B.

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1) A totalitarian leader tends to use propaganda campaigns spread by state-controlled mass media.

2) Totalitarianism is the most extreme kind of authoritarianism. In authoritarian governments, the state has a single power holder (individual dictator or political elite) that monopolizes political power. If not contested, provides society some degree of liberty. On the other hand, a totalitarian regime strives to control essentially all aspects of social life, like the economy, sciences, education, art, private matters, and social morals.  

3) The Economist has deemed China's social credit system as totalitarian because it is used to screen and classify its citizens according to their personal behavior.

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Thank you have a good day

Answer:

Nicee

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Answer:

E. Mongols

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Genghis Khan primarily united all Mongol Tribes. So its E. Mongols

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Answer: Genghis Khan was born Temüjin to a royal clan of the Mongols. When he was nine, his father Yesügei was poisoned and Temüjin was held captive by his former supporters.

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Comma (,)

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what is missing is a subject and a verb or

a complete thought

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1 is a 2 is c

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The answer to this question is B. Flexibility.

Answer: The major event this passage foreshadows is "i am not" im not sure but this is my answer.

Explanation: why? well foreshadowing in a story is when u find a warning leading up to an event and "i am not" leads up to "for reasons you will soon discover the same"

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Answer Choices

Charlotte’s decision to join the crew

Charlotte’s decision to turn Zachariah in

Charlotte’s decision to have tea with Mr. Hollybrass

i dont know the story but i think its either "Charlotte’s decision to join the crew " or "Charlotte’s decision to turn Zachariah in "

Answer:

foreshadows

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im not sure. can someone letme know? if possible. thnak you!

Answer:

A.

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