Sample Final Essay
Sample Outline - Descriptive Essay
Visiting the Hockey Hall of Fame
Introduction
Introduce the subject of your descriptive essay with a thesis statement covering
place, object, etc. you are writing about
Thesis: The Hockey Hall of Fame is full of sights, sounds, and experiences that
hockey fans of all ages.

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Answer 1

Hi. This question wants to assess your writing ability and for that reason, it is not possible for me to write this essay for you, but I will show you how to write it.

First, you must keep in mind that your question asks for a descriptive essay, that is, this is an essay where you will describe something, showing the characteristics and composition of an object, which in this case is the Hockey Hall of Fame.

You can write your essay by following these steps:

Introduction: Introduce what the Hockey Hall of Fame is and show your Thesis statement. The thesis statement refers to your position on the subject of the text, in which case you can present your opinion on what Hockey Hall of Fame is and what it stands for. Remember that the introduction is a short paragraph, five or six lines long.Body: You will write two paragraphs. In each paragraph you will describe the Hockey Hall of Fame, showing its characteristics, composition and meaning. Remember to use several adjectives to describe you well. You can write three paragraphs if you feel it is necessary and that it will make the description more specific. Remember that the adjective refers to words that have characteristics such as: spacious, colorful, beautiful, silent, lovely, among others.Conclusion: You will show your final thoughts about Hockey Hall of Fame, after analyzing all these characteristics. This final thought should reinforce the view you made in the introduction.

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Related Questions

write dialogue about planning a birthday party for your grandfather​

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Answer:

Me: Its a great idea to give a grandpa a surprise party, but we need to plan it all

(Whoever you like): Yes, and that too very secretively

Me: Absolutely, We have two weeks time to prepare party for him

Person:Yes, but two weeks are not enough time

Me: why not?

Person: Because first we need to decide many things, then order them, receive and sanitize them and finally put them to use .

Me: what are the most important things we need to decide on ? The cake?

Person: Well Yes, this is important, not as half as deciding his birthday gifts and decorations, i will order them

Me: That's sound good, so the gifts get postponed tomorrow

Person: what kind of cake he like ?

Me: He likes coffee cake. I will order one kg coffee cake

Person: Done ! this is your responsibility. what do you have in mind for decorations

Me: The regular party things like balloons and steamers

Person: This is so basic, don't you have any tech ideas?

Me:Oh yes ! i can put together slideshow of pictures

Person: This is a fantastic idea, i think we have the main plan in place. tomorrow we will work out the final details and order will be placed

Me: Alright I'm so excited about it

I HOPE THIS WILL HELP YOU, HAVE A GREAT DAY : )

4 Fill in the correct form of the verbs in brackets.1 I wish I2 If only I......3 Steve wishes he4 If only she..5 Tom wishes he6 I wish I7 I wish she8 Mrs Jones wishes she9 If only badn't forgotten......(not/forget) her birthday.(have) the money to buy a new car..... (speak) so rudely to his boss because he fired him.(tell) him the truth. He wouldn't be so angry with her.(not/have) so much homework to do.(not/break) my sister's doll. She wouldn't be sad now.(stop) interrupting me all the time.(speak) a foreign language.I(be) taller. I would join the basketball team.(not/crash) his father's car. Now his father is upset.10 He wishes he11 I wish Mum(let) me go to the party next week.

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Answer:

1. I wish I could fly.

2. If only she had seen the doctor earlier.

3. Steve wishes he were a doctor:  

4. If only she worked harder.

5. Tom wishes to become a professional football player.

6. I wish I had not run so fast. hadn't run so fast.

7. I wish she would come

8. Mrs Jones that she can study computer science next school year.

Explanation:

The rest I don't get. You jumbled everything together.

Now that you have finished reading the works in this unit, consider the ideals, values, and themes that early American writers considered to be important and worthy of inclusion in their journals, sermons, and poems. What are these ideals and values? Why were they important? How do different writers incorporate them into their works? Did certain values or ideals seem to become more or less important over time? If so, why? Cite specific examples from the writings of Bradford, Winthrop, Bradstreet, and Edwards in your response.

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Answer:

American Writers revolved their life and work around God. They had so much respect for God and wanted the people to respect and adore God as they did. Over time? As of today, in my opinion, people still have a respect for God but not many people adore him like the American Writers did. Why? People have grown to become a lot more uncertain about things they once believed. Which is totally okay because any normal person will question life as they have the rights to do so. In 'A Model of Christian Charity' by John Winthrop,  Winthrop writes about how important it is to include God in their lives. In 'Sinners in the Hands of God' by Jonathan Edwards, Edwards writes about how you would be punished by God if you sinned against him and/or didn't believe in him.

Which sentences in the list below demonstrate correct use of
commas?
Patty's new husband, Joe, is a mechanic who teaches at my school,
Out of six cousins, my cousin Jesse is the only one who wants to become an engineer
Cousin Estella, who has blue hair, loves to rebuild old cars.
Among the 25 students in my home economics class, only my classmate, Cassie, actually knows how
to cook
The auto shop class, that meets in the afternoon, rebuilt a roadster last year, this year, the morning
class will rebuild a motorcycle

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Answer:

1, 3 and 4 are correct

I think

not soo sure

Answer:

2. Out of six cousins, my cousin Jesse is the only one who wants to become an engineer.

3. Cousin Estella, who has blue hair, loves to rebuild old cars.

4. Among the 25 students in my home economics class, only my classmate, Cassie, actually knows how to cook.

Explanation:

1. Patty's new husband, Joe, is a mechanic who teaches at my school.

2. Out of six cousins, my cousin Jesse is the only one who wants to become an engineer.

3. Cousin Estella, who has blue hair, loves to rebuild old cars.

4. Among the 25 students in my home economics class, only my classmate, Cassie, actually knows how to cook.

5. The auto shop class, which meets in the afternoon, rebuilt a roadster last year. This year, the morning

6. The class will rebuild a motorcycle.

Fixed all grammar errors above

Sometimes people say silly things they do not intend to be mean.

Identify the choice that corrects this run-on sentence.

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“ Sometimes people say silly things. They do not intend to be mean.”

Sometimes people say silly things they do not intend to be mean! This option correctly splits the independent clause in a complete sentence by adding an exclamation point at the end to indicate the speaker's tone. So, the correct option is C.

What is Sentence?

A sentence is a semantically complete unit of speech composed of one or more words that expresses an entire thought, idea, or message. It usually has a subject and a predicate and might be a statement, an inquiry, an order, or an exclamation.

A set of words must meet specific grammatical conditions in order to be termed a sentence. A subject (the person, place, thing, or idea about which the sentence is about) and a predication (the part of the sentence that indicates what the subject does or what is being done to the subject) are examples of these. A phrase must additionally possess a logical structure and express a complete notion on its own.

Therefore, the correct option is C.

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Your question is incomplete, most probably the complete question is:

Read the sentence:

Sometimes people say silly things they do not intend to be mean.

Identify the choice that corrects this run-on sentence.

Sometimes people say silly things, they do not intend to be mean.Sometimes people say silly things; they do not intend to be mean.Sometimes people say silly things they do not intend to be mean!Sometimes, people say sill they not intend to be mean.

Which two things about the hawk are correct? A It was the hunter's favorite hawk. B It was the only pet the hunter had. C It was trained to hunt. D It was twice the size of most hawks. It was an unusual color.​

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Answer:

B and C

Explanation:

It was the only pet the hunter had

It was trained to hunt.

Answer:

it was twice the size of most hawks it was an unusual color

4) Fill in the blanks with a, an or the where necessary:

a) Have you seen Principal? Yes, he is talking...... visitor.
b) What is..... average height of .....Nepalese males?
c) We had to wait for ....hour and half.... d) ......rice is in ......uncovered dish.
e) ........Rapti flows through..... Royal Chitwan National Park.​

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Answer:

A. a

B. the, no article

C. an

D. no article, an

E. no article, the

Explanation:

Hope this will help you. If any answer is incorrect please forgive me.

A student conducts an experiment to determine how the temperature of water affects the time for sugar to dissolve. In each trial, the student uses a different amount of sugar and a different temperature of water.

What is wrong with this experimental design?


The student changed too many variables.

The student does not have a dependent variable.

The student needs to perform more trials.

The student did not change enough variables.

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Answer:

the dont change

Explanation:

indenpendet

why is cursing someone in authority bad?

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Answer:

Explanation:

As children we're taught that cursing, even when we're in pain, is inappropriate, betrays a limited vocabulary or is somehow low class in that ambiguous way many cultural lessons suggest. But profanity serves a physiological, emotional and social purpose — and it's effective only because it's inappropriate.

       # I AM ILLITERATE

What is the controlling idea ? It seems

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please provide more information

guess the songs:do you get deja vu oh.....

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Answer:

deja Vu by olive Rodriguez

Answer:

I have not clue I'm mainly early 2000s type of music dude

What is the difference between Physical evidence and Trace evidence?​

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Answer:

Physical evidence refers to any item that comes from a nonliving origin. For example, fingerprints, tire marks, footprints, fibers , paint and building materials while Trace evidence is any item that is invisible to the naked eye and is collected by brushing or vacuuming a suspect surface

Neymar machine that Run on electricity

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Heater, cooler, lights, refrigerator, dishwasher, electric oven, and many more.

change the following to indirect speech
1)"can you help me with this?said Ada

2)"you should obey your parents,said James

3)"The sun sets in the west."the teacher said.​

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Answer:

1) Ada said can i help her with this.

2) James said that i should obey my parents.

3) The teacher said that the sun sets in the west.

Franklin watched as patients reacted to Charles. When Franklin tried it himself, he felt nothing. Franklin then blindfolded the other patients and asked Charles to repeat the process. Which detail best completes the summary? O The patients could only be mesmerized with Franklin in the room. O Patients felt a fiery heat wherever Charles moved his hands. O Patients continued to feel pain as long as they believed it existed. The patients responded incorrectly or did not respond at all.​

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Answer:

Patients continued to feel pain as long as they believed it existed

Explanation:

According to the given excerpt, Franklin watches in amazement as the patients respond to Charles but when he tried it for himself, he felt nothing, so he decided to blindfold the patients and see if Charles would still have the same effect on them.

Therefore, the detail that best completes the summary is that patients continued to feel pain as long as they believed it existed

write a folktale that you have heard or read. ​

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Once upon a time, there lived a widow woman and her son, Jack, on their small farm in the country.

Every day, Jack would help his mother with the chores - chopping the wood, weeding the garden and milking the cow.  But despite all their hard work, Jack and his mother were very poor with barely enough money to keep themselves fed.

"What shall we do, what shall we do?" said the widow, one spring day.  "We don't have enough money to buy seed for the farm this year!  We must sell our cow, Old Bess, and with the money buy enough seed to plant a good crop."

"All right, mother," said Jack, "it's market-day today.  I'll go into town and sell Bessy."

So Jack took the cow's halter in his hand, walked through the garden gate and headed off toward town.  He hadn't gone far when he met a funny-looking, old man who said to him, "Good morning, Jack."

"Good morning to you," said Jack, wondering how the little, old man knew his name.

"Where are you off to this fine morning?" asked the man.

"I'm going to market to sell our cow, Bessy."

"Well what a helpful son you are!" exclaimed the man, "I have a special deal for such a good boy like you."

The little, old man looked around to make sure no one was watching and then opened his hand to show Jack what he held.

"Beans?" asked Jack, looking a little confused.

"Three magical bean seeds to be exact, young man.  One, two, three!  So magical are they, that if you plant them over-night, by morning they grow right up to the sky," promised the funny little man.  "And because you're such a good boy, they're all yours in trade for that old milking cow."

"Really?" said Jack, "and you're quite sure they're magical?"

"I am indeed!  And if it doesn't turn out to be true you can have your cow back."

An effective thesis statement includes…
an outline of the argument
indirect quotations
points that counter the main argument
specific information

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Answer:

an outline of the argument.

Explanation:

The thesis should argue for something and be clear. It shouldn't include unnecessary information.

18. Cahina ...... an economic crisis at this moment.
O encountered
O encounters
O encounter
O will encounter
O is encountering​

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Answer:

is encountering​

Explanation:

1. He couldn’t find his passport. Later, it……………..among his friend’s books. 1 point turned off 2.held out turned 2.out turned up.

2. When it is raining hard, we can hardly…………….what the teacher is saying. 1 point make off put up with make out Make up

3. “Hypothesis” means: 1 point postulates fact Guess theory 4.

Amphibian can live both…………water and………….land. 1 point on, on in, in in, on on, in

5. Everyone should look ahead and save…………..money each year for when he retires. 1 point A few a little much a many

6. ………………. carelessness, she performed well. 1 point In spite of Despite of However Though

7. We are not……………to carry the burden. 1 point enough strength strong enoughly strong enough enough strong

8. We should ………. from his house early in the morning. 1 point set down set up set off set about

9. Do you mind………………. the door? 1 point To open opened opening to opening

10. The police have caught the man who…………. the bank. 1 point had stolen stole robbed had robbed

11. The meaning of the word MITIGATE is: 1 point to protest to alleviate to justify to imitate

12. This is the most fascinating novel…………. 1 point ever James Joyce has written James Joyce ever writes James Joyce ever has written James Joyce has ever written

13. A widespread occurrence of an infectious disease in a community at a particular time is: 1 point Pandemic Endemic Plague Epidemic

14. He gave………….. 1 point an assignment very tough to the class the class tough assignment a tough assignment to the class to the class a tough assignment

15. Rotation refers to the turning of the Earth……revolution refers to its movement around the sun. 1 point beside and in addition to besides Questions 16-20 are based on the following passages:  16. The passage mainly discusses the 1 point effects of interviewing on job applicants inadequacy of interviewing job applicants techniques that interviewers use for judging job applicants judgments of interviewers concerning job applicants 17. The word “hindrance” is closest in meaning to 1 point encouragement assistance procedure interference 18. According to the passage, the halo effect 1 point exemplifies who one good characteristic colors perceptions. stands out as the worst judgmental error. helps the interviewer’s capability to judge real ability. takes effect only when a candidate is well dressed. 19. According to the passage, the first impression 1 point can easily be altered. has been repeatedly demonstrated to the applicant. is the one that stays with the interviewers. is unrelated to the interviewer’s prejudices. 20. The word “confirm” is closest in meaning to 1 point recollect verify misrepresent conclude​

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1. The correct phrase is turned up.

2. The correct phrase is make out.

3. “Hypothesis” means theory.

4. The correct prepositions are in and on.

5. The correct phrase is a little.

6. The correct phrase is In spite of.

7. The correct phrase is strong enough.

8. The correct phrase is set off.

9. The correct word is opening.

10. The correct word is robbed.

11. The correct meaning of the word MITIGATE is alleviate.

12. The correct phrase is James Joyce has ever written.

13. Epidemic means a widespread occurrence of an infectious disease in a community at a particular time.

14. The correct phrase is the class a tough assignment.

15. The correct phrase is around the sun.

16. The passage mainly discusses the techniques that interviewers use for judging job applicants.

17. The closest meaning of the word “hindrance” is interference.

18. The halo effect stands out as the worst judgmental error.

19. The first impression is the one that stays with the interviewers.

20. The closest meaning of the word “confirm” is verify.

Thus, when the correct words or phrases are used in sentences, they are always suitable.

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Write an essay on a wedding you attended last year in 450 word

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Answer:

Explanation:The marriage of my friends brother came off in Nov. I was cordially invited to attend that. It was the grandest marriage, I had ever attended. It afforded great joy and mirth to every member of the procession. It is an unforgettable experience.

On the day of marriage, the house of my friend was tastefully decorated with multi colored flowers, bunting and balloons. A served with juice, sweets, dry fruits and coffee. In the evening at about 4 p.m., some ceremonies, prior to the departure of the Barat were performed. Everybody was putting on his best suit. There was joy and cheer everywhere.

The priest put a coronet decked with flowers on the bridegroom’s head. The women started singing songs. The bridegroom was made to ride a mare decked with ornaments’ of silver. The best band of the city created sweet sensations by its tunes of modern films. The Barat started on foot towards the bride’s house. It was at a distance of half a mile. The party of jolly young boys and girls began to dance and twist to the tunes of the band. There was a drum beater surrounded by lust young bachelors chancing and jumping at the head of the barat, crackers were also let off. The on lookers were looking at the Barat with eager eyes from both the sides of the roads.  

The Barat reached near the bride’s house. Multi colored bulbs, flowers and buntings decorated the house and it looked as if it were a place in paradise. The seating arrangement was made under a very big canopy. The Barat received the heartiest reception.

The priest recited verses from the scriptures. The bride’s father and bride groom’s father embraced each other amidst shouts. The automatic camera took photographs. The bride groom was made to ride a mare decked with ornaments of silver. The best band of the city created sweet sensations by its tunes of modern films. The Barat started on foot towards the bride’s house. It was at a distance of half a mile.

The marriage was solemnized amidst Vedic mantra’s before the holy fire. In the early dawn the bride parted from her parents with tears in her eyes to start a new life in her in laws house.

what fasion trend do you like and why you like it?​

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Answer:

I like baggy clothes in general because anyone can wear baggy fashion, all shapes and sizes sure to be comfortable in this stylish trend. The ease and comfort of slipping into loose clothing and the air of nonchalance accompanies every outfit.

how do you feel about your ability to oppose fake news?

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Answer:

I

Explanation:

I will feel bad because it is fake

Answer:

great

Explanation:

I really hate fake news and I hope that people understant that fake news are differentiate us

Why is the title of the story: The Good Samaritan? Explain.

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Explanation:

Finally, a Samaritan happens upon the traveler. Although Samaritans and Jews despised each other, the Samaritan helps the injured man. ... The phrase "Good Samaritan", meaning someone who helps a stranger, derives from this parable, and many hospitals and charitable organizations are named after the Good Samaritan.

Kumon D2 101 Old Yeller By Fred Gipson

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Soooooo where’s the

change these sentences into negative and interrogate sentences​

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Answer:

1. Does he goes to the market?

He does not goes to the market

2. Does Ram plucks the mango?

Ram does not plucks the mango

3. Do you sing a song?

You do not sing a song

4. Do they play  in the garden?

They do not play in the garden

5. Do I write a letter?

I do not write a letter

Explanation:

Which choice best defines citing evidence?

A.
attempting to understand the background of the author
B.
explaining the steps you took to interpret the text
C.
referring to the text to support your interpretation of a text
D.
indicating the extra sources you used to understand the text

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Answer:

D indicating the extra sources you used to understand the text

Help me please………………………

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Answer:

A create emotional responses

make a conversation between two people about the situation of odering a product on phone

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Answer:

me: Hello may I please order a phone?

her: Yes which phone would you like?

me: the newest iphone would be good.

her: follow me, the iphone 12 will be $1200

me: This looks good thank you very much

Explanation:

Read the entry on Jonas Salk from Compton's Encyclopedia/The Britannica School Edition, and answer the question beneath the text.

Compton's Encyclopedia

Jonas Salk (1914-1995). For the first half of the 20th century, poliomyelitis, also known as infantile paralysis, was one of the most dreaded diseases to attack young people. By 1955 American physician and researcher Jonas Salk had developed a vaccine that almost eradicated the disease in the United States and other developed countries.

Jonas Edward Salk was born in New York City on October 28, 1914. He graduated from the City College of New York in 1934 and earned his doctorate in medicine from New York University's College of Medicine in 1939. While in medical school he had worked with Thomas Francis Jr. on killed-virus immunology studies. In 1942 he joined a group at the University of Michigan working on a vaccine against influenza. The vaccine was perfected in 1953.

In 1947 Salk became associate professor of bacteriology and head of the Virus Research Laboratory at the University of Pittsburgh School of Medicine. There he began working on the polio vaccine. Three viruses caused polio, and a vaccine had to be effective against all of them. By 1952 Salk had developed such a vaccine and conducted field tests on children. His findings were published in 1953, and a mass field test was done the next year.

On April 12, 1955, the vaccine was released for use in the United States. In 1957 Salk was named professor of experimental medicine at Pittsburgh, and in 1963 he went to San Diego as head of the Institute (later named the Salk Institute) for Biological Studies. In 1977 Salk was awarded the Presidential Medal of Freedom. He died on June 23, 1995, in La Jolla, California.

Answer the following question based on the Compton's Encyclopedia reading:

Which choice best describes the reasons behind Jonas Salk's decision to search for a cure for poliomyelitis?

The disease affected children in the United States all of Salk's life.
The disease became an epidemic shortly after Salk became a doctor.
Jonas Salk's own child contracted poliomyelitis as an infant.
Jonas Salk suffered from poliomyelitis as a young child.

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Answer:

There really is no answer. A is a 1/2 truth. B the reasons for not choosing B are given. We know nothing about C or D, but they are likely not true. None of his 3 children had Polio. No mention is made of himself.

I guess B, but a marker could pick anything, the choices are so bad.

Explanation:

A isn't true. He lived long after the vaccine was developed.

B. It was a dreaded disease long before he became a doctor. and some 15 years after. (1939 to 1954)

C. We don't know anything about Salk's personal life. C and D are both not part of the same missing piece of information.

D. We don't know if he did or not. The article does not say.  

what is the intersection of culture and interpersonal communication of how you see me

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Answer:

hroiehro23qfhq2pbnewnf

Explanation:

bfeif2ipfb42ifbeivb3eifb2ee fewbfe

nn'n'3n4

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