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Which of these is the best revision of the sentence??

PLZ HELP Which Of These Is The Best Revision Of The Sentence??

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Answer 1
Number 2.

It should be choose not chose
Answer 2
I would say its 2 ,2 makes the most since

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Which sentence should be revised to eliminate excessive wordiness??

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Answer:

The first sentence is wordy, and should be revised.

My reasons:

1. A hurricane is a storm (common sense), there is no need to reiterate that.

2. An entrance to your house is a door (most of the time), there is no need to say "including the doors."

3. It would have been sufficient to just say "debris" and not "debris and other items"- because what other items?

Let me know if this helps!

answer - a. explanation- what they said ^^^^^^^^^^^^

Read the story description and historical context for the short story "Condensed Milk" and answer the question.

Story Description:

If you were starving, what would you do for food? "Condensed Milk" tells the story of a political prisoner in a Russian gulag (a forced-labor camp) who is faced with a choice: stay in the gulag—working and starving—or escape from the prison and risk dying. What choice would you make?

Historical Context:

From 1929 to 1953, Joseph Stalin was the dictator of the Soviet Union. His goal was to transform the Soviet Union from a poor society into a world superpower. He used terror and violence to rule, and under his reign, millions of his own people died in work camps, from starvation due to famine, or by execution.

Select a detail to support the idea that punishment was harsh under Joseph Stalin's rule.

Stalin ruled the Soviet Union from 1929 to 1953.
Stalin sentenced Soviet citizens to work camps or had them executed.
Stalin used terror and violence to rule the Soviet Union.
Stalin wanted to transform the Soviet Union from a poor country to a superpower.

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The correct option is C. Stalin used terror and violence to rule the Soviet Union a detail to support the idea that punishment was harsh under Joseph Stalin's rule. He used terror and violence to rule, and under his reign, millions of his own people died in work camps, from starvation due to famine, or by execution.

What is the main problem in the story "Condensed Milk"?

The dramatic fight between two forces in a story is referred to as conflict. There wouldn't be a plot without conflict. Conflict is an issue between the protagonist and antagonist forces that needs to be resolved.

After his own experiences in a gulag, Varlam Shalamov wrote this book about them. It portrays the prisoners' apathy as they slowly approach death, the certainty of betrayal and deceit, and the incessant need for material fulfillment to decrease the hollow, burnt sensation inside.

Learn more about Varlam Shalamov here:

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I need a last name for a made up story related to snow, ice or winters.

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Answer: Ice Queen

Explanation: because it would be a beautiful name

Gelida meaning “frozen” in Latin

Read the following scenario: Cinderella's stepmother has forbidden her to go to the ball until all of her chores are done. Cinderella enlists the help of her animal friends to get her chores done and make a dress for the ball. Which outcome would best describe this scenario?

The character defeats the problem.
The character learns to live with the problem.
The problem defeats the character.
The character does not learn from the problem.

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The answer is that the character defeats the problem
The character defeats the problem because she still ends up going to the ball

what you know about a "review"? How is it different from other types of writing?

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Answer:

a review is a short a summary about how you feel about this certain thing. lets say book for example. If you were to write a review you would technically rate the book. Ex. I loved this book because it was really unique and its not too hard.

Explanation:

A review is basically a short recap on something you’ve read/learned.

Fahrenheit 451 HELP!
symbol, metaphor, simile, allusion, and foreshadowing.
(Give examples and page numbers!)

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Answer: easy peasy

Explanation: G O O G L E is the best answer

Figurative Language

Connotations: Snake (literal animal), connotation is the negative (snake-not very loyal with a negative connotation). Think about a positive, negative or neutral connotation.

Simile: Uses like, as, than, or resembles.
Ex: Her hair bounced like a spring.

Metaphor: A comparison between two unlike things without using the words like or as.
Ex: Her eyes shot moon beams into me.

Personification: Giving human-like qualities to inanimate objects.
Ex: The wind whispered warnings to turn back.

Imagery: Descriptive language that appeals to the five senses— needs either sight, sound, smell, touch, taste.
Ex: Light, foamy clouds tickled the crisp, blue sky.

Symbolism: When something is used to represent a deeper meaning.
Ex: It is now his darkest hour
Or
He bled Stars and Stripes.

What can be difficult for people at bedtime?
falling asleep
moving a picture
talking to a parent
taking a warm bath

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falling asleep maybe
It is most likely falling asleep it’s the most relevant answer to the question

Father, Betsie, and Corrie were released.

True False

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Answer:

true

Explanation:

I don't know this answer is right or wrong

But I tried my best.

Thank you

False because corrie doesn’t want it

What are the four main categories used to develop a narrative?

1. point of view, sensory detail, characters, and style
2. evidence, opinion, style, point of view
3. plot, claim, point of view, and style
4. plot, characters, point of view, and style

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Hiii I believe it would be number 1. Because I personally think it involves in a lot of the categories we’ve all experienced whenever we write a narrative but if it’s wrong then I am sooo sorry!! :(
Answer would be number one

Read the paragraph. Then answer the question that follows.

Perhaps you wanted pizza for dinner, but were out voted by the rest of the family who wanted chili. This is similar to what happens in a community. One person has to give up a right for the good of the group. Sometimes citizens' duties and rights conflict with each other. A good example is a public protest. People have the right to meet in groups and share ideas. However, a protest can disrupt traffic or other normal activities. A city must provide extra police protection to keep people safe. Therefore, the city has the right to require permission in advance for a protest. Government must make laws to balance the rights of individuals and different groups of people.

Which of the following statements best describes this paragraph?

The paragraph contains categories of comparison.
The paragraph contains a simile.
The paragraph contains no text connections.
The paragraph contains an analogy.

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I just woke you so much lol lol I’m bout to go get home and now I need some money to do my hair and then
um, i think the answer is “the paragraph contains a comparison

Hey…. I just need some advice. So I suck at math right like I dont know anything, or I should say I dont remember anything! So a little bit over the summer I have been doing Khan acadamey and what not. But I still cant seem to do anything right! So school here starts september 1st and Im gonna be a freshman in highschool. What do I do!!!

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Well just relax everything will be ok. I was nervous as a freshman as well and struggled but your teacher will always be there for you, just keep on studying and when school starts don’t be afraid to raise your hand or ask for help when needed because they won’t know if you’re struggling. Personally in my high school my teachers offered tutoring after school. Don’t stress and break ur head just enjoy ur break and wait until school starts cause i’m pretty sure not everyone is gonna remember anything as well. They take it little by little and it’s pretty easy.

study some in any way possible and talk to your parents abt it, be confident and be yourself and that way ppl will like you.

Is page one of the story the importance of being earnest the most important part/section of the story? If not what is the most important section?

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Answer:

The important section is Visoin

Explanation:

Answer:

Ze important section is Visoin!!

Explanation:

Which sentence contains a misspelled word??

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Answer:

second option

Explanation:

chose is past tense

Answer:

The second sentence.

Explanation:

There are misspelled words.

Civil Disobedience

Part 2:

Thoreau’s ideas had a profound effect on a man named Gandhi. Gandhi, was a leader in India who worked to end British rule. He led India to independence and inspired many to non-violent forms of protest and resistance. He fought to end poverty, worked to expand women's right to vote, and built bridges between ethnic and religious groups. Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet. In India, Gandhi's form of protest was called the "non-cooperation movement." He urged Indians to boycott British education systems and leave government jobs. The movement was very popular, and in part to stop its spread, the British controlled government arrested him. After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again. He inspired many to follow him on marches to protest various taxes. On one such march, thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax. This march set the example of non-violent resistance to the government that others in the country followed. Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.

Gandhi's model of resistance and reform was creative, appealing, and successful. As a result, Dr. Martin Luther King looked to Gandhi when the time came to find a way to resist segregation in the South. The lunch counter protests, famous for the passive response to anger, and even violence, aimed to end the separation enforced by laws in some regions of the South. King also organized walks, marches, and bus rides that were meant to bring attention to the issues facing African Americans. These forms of protest were directly modeled on Gandhi's, but King took them straight to the source of oppression. Where Gandhi's protests created awareness and built momentum, King's protests were in the face of great hatred and fear. The passive, non-violent protests were ultimately effective, mainly because the passive response to violence cast the opposition as brutes. However, change came slowly and at the cost of many lives. King remained committed to peaceful protest, however, until his death. King learned from Gandhi, expanding on what worked, applying old techniques to a new problem. Gandhi owed his philosophy, in part, to a New England poet who loved the woods.

Based on the bolded paragraph, which line shows the success of Gandhi work?

Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.
After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again.
… thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax.
Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet.

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Answer:

Yes mate it does

Explanation:

Answer:

d

Explanation:

i did the text

S. E. Hinton said in an interview that she really gets to know her characters. In fact, she says she focuses more on them than on the setting in her books. In the first chapter of The Outsiders, how does she describe the “greasers”?
by using mostly indirect characterization
by showing how each one handles conflict
by using the plot details to show what they’re like
by using mostly direct characterization

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Hey there!

I think that the correct answer would be D.

For example, she directly describes how Ponyboy and most of the gang style their hair, and how they "grease" it.

Hope this helps! Have a wonderful day!

In a written story, the dialogue is different then the rest of the story because _. punctuation marks are used,sentinses and paragraphs are used, and periods are used. please hurry I need help ASAP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i have to go feed my horse

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Sentences and paragraphs
Just ignote this im only doing this so that i message people

04.05 history versus fiction brainly
flvs

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Answer:

what is flvs?

Explanation:

yeah what is flvs? not sure ?

melissa has chosen a career in business administration what would be a good job market for melissa.

a. a bustling city with many businesses
b.a rural area with lots of farms
c.a coastal town
d.a concentrated manufacturing district

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A., since her degree is in business, there are more opportunities for her to get the money she deserves.

Answer:

A bustling city with many businesses would be the ideal place for her, looking at her career she would be able to profit more from a city with many businesses who could come to her for help regarding different problems.

Explanation:

Is page 1 of the importance of being earnest the most important section of the book?


Scene: Morning-room in ALGERNON'S flat in Half Moon Street
The room is luxuriously and artistically furnished. The
sound of a piano is heard in the adjoining room. LANE is
arranging afternoon tea on the table, and after the music has
ceased, ALGERNON enters.
ALGERNON. Did you hear what I was playing, Lane?
LANE. I didn't think it polite to listen, sir.
ALGERNON. I'm sorry for that, for your sake. I don't
play accurately — any one can play accurately — but I
play with a wonderful expression. As far as the piano is
concerned, sentiment is my forte. I keep science for
Life.
LANE. Yes, sir.
ALGERNON. And, speaking of the science of Life, have

you got the cucumber sandwiches cut for Lady Bracknell?

LANE. Yes, sir. (Hands them on a salver.)
ALGERNON. (Inspects them, takes two, and sits down on the
sofa.) Oh! ... by the way, Lane, I see from your book that
on Thursday night when Lord Shoreman and Mr. Worthing were dining with me, eight bottles of champagne are entered as having been consumed.

LANE.
Yes, sir; eight bottles and a pint.

ALGERNON.
Why is it that at a bachelor’s establishment the servants invariably drink the champagne? I ask merely for information.

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Answer:

gagagulgulgaagaagulgul

Answer:

Because it represents symbolism of the build up of each character, the first page gives the reader an idea of what kind of scenario is going on, along with character development with the novel.

Explanation:

PLZZ HELP!! YOU GET 20 IF YOU DO!!!
Find the root and its meaning in the word below. Use a dictionary if necessary.

Disease


root:
1.dis
2.sease
3.ease
4.sea

meaning:
5.pain
6.comfort
7.absence of
8.health

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Root: 3.
Meaning: Health

Answer:

1

Explanation:

hffggfy uyhjifbuyg yggjigf yygggh uhggghgg hhgg

In the spaces to the left of each number write P for phrase, IC for independent clause, and DC for dependent clause.
______ 1. Under extreme pressure

______ 2. To turn to the right

______ 3. Knitting is difficult

______ 4. Who the best candidate will be

______ 5. In time of extreme danger

______6 Listen

______ 7. When I heard

______ 8. Until you told me

______ 9. I was chosen

______ 10. Whom he addressed

______ 11. Seen in the park

______ 12. Walk carefully

______ 13. Angered by that remark

______ 14. Before the exam

______ 15. Before he left

______ 16. On the floor were my books

______ 17. Jump

______ 18. Since swimming in the lake

______ 19. Riding home in the car

______ 20. Besides jogging

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Answer:

1. DC 2. P 3. DC 4. IC 5. P 6. DC 7. P 8. P 9. DC 10. IC 11. DC 12. DC 13. P 14. DC 15. DC 16. P 17. DC 18. P 19. P 20. Dc

Explanation:

1 P
2 IC
3 DC
4 DC
5 DC
6 P
7 IC

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Answer:

The last one. It says loose and it's supposed to be lose.

D. Loose is the misspelled word, supposed to be lose.

What part of speech is the word in CAPS?

Brian WALKED slowly home, as the day was so warm and pleasant.

Noun
Verb
Adverb
Adjective

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Answer:

That would be a past tense verb!

Explanation:

Verbs are action words.

Yah verb
Explanation the person above said it and I jus need points :)

Add a subordinate clause in these sentences to make them complex sentences. Add the type of clause that is in parenthesis.

1. I have met the president of the company, __________.
(adjective)

2. I want _______________.
(noun)

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Answer:

1. I have met the president of the company who's been living in that $1,000,000 estate by the ocean.

(adjective)

2. I want what you have.

(noun)

Explanation:

I met the president of the company who’s to rich for his own good

I want to murder everyone

The setting of a story is the time and ___ where the action unfolds.

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The answer is the place
The answer is place.

I will give u a brainlyist if u answer this Q correctly

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Answer:

no change needed I think so please tell if its correct

Answer:

The 3 one

Explanation:

it is they will lose their cat

A prompt—executive Bird is the Jay

by Emily Dickinson

A prompt—executive Bird is the Jay—
Bold as a Bailiff's1 Hymn—
Brittle and Brief in quality—
Warrant2 in every line—

Sitting a Bough3 like a Brigadier4
Confident and straight—
Much is the mien5 of him in March
As a Magistrate6—

legal officer
legal action
branch of a tree
army officer (British)
appearance
judge

I Heard a Bird Sing

By Oliver Herford

I heard a bird sing
In the dark of December.
A magical thing
And sweet to remember.

"We are nearer to Spring
Than we were in September,”
I heard a bird sing
In the dark of December.

Review the two poems. What literary device is used in "I Heard a Bird Sing" that is not used in "A prompt—executive Bird is the Jay"?

Dramatic irony
Foreshadowing
Repetition
Simile

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A prompt isn’t the answer

***50 POINTS***
Give a definition for the following 5 words:
-Moral Values:
-Economic Values:
-Political Values:
-Social Values:
-Human Rights:

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Answer:

Moral values- a certain type of guideline that we humans set for ourselves based on what is ethical and good

Economic Values- are things considered when making a purchase or selling something, these are considered to see if the transaction is really worthwhile

political values- a political value is what we consider to be important to us when choosing a political figure to represent us

social values- is the importance we place on experiences and people around us

human rights- rights that we consider a belief that every person is entitled to simply because they are people

These are definitions to my understanding and might not be what you're looking for, let me know if it helped!

Explanation:

Moral values are relative values that protect life and are respectful of the dual life value of self and others.

economic value is a measure of the benefit provided by a good or service to an economic agent.


Civil Disobedience

Part 1

Most people remember Gandhi and Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. as reformers who practiced non-violent forms of protest and advocacy. Both effectively changed the popular opinion about emotional issues for their countries and brought in a wave of change that was long overdue. But the practice of non-violent protest, or civil disobedience, started long before either Gandhi or King. It began with a quiet, shy poet who is best known for writing a lot about a pond.

Henry David Thoreau lived from 1817 until 1862, mainly in the area of Concord, Massachusetts. The issue that would tear the country apart in the 1860s had already begun dividing the nation. Thoreau was only 14 when Nat Turner led the slave rebellion in Virginia and was later hanged. In his late 20s, Thoreau began speaking against slavery in public, echoing the voices of freedmen like Frederick Douglass and Lewis Hayden.

Thoreau believed that a government that supported slavery was corrupt and immoral. He was also deeply suspicious of government. For these and other reasons, Thoreau refused to pay his poll tax for a number of years. The poll tax was a legal tax owed by every person. It was basically a tax on one's body. After not paying for years, he was at last arrested. He spent only one night in jail, however, as a relative paid the tax for him. He was reportedly furious that any tax was paid on his behalf.

It was this experience that Thoreau wrote about in an essay called "Civil Disobedience." In this essay, he argued that being moral and just came before allegiance to government. He wrote “If the machine of government is of such a nature that it requires you to be the agent of injustice to another, then, I say, break the law." He also felt that voting was not enough to ensure that the right thing be done. He wrote that "even voting for the right is doing nothing for it… A wise man will not leave the right to the mercy of chance…" He felt that one had a moral responsibility to resist unjust laws.

What does the author show in the story of Thoreau going to jail?

How Thoreau protested
How angry Thoreau was
That few people protested
He was influential

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Answer:

Thoreau protested laws that he believed were unfair.

Explanation:

Use the excerpt below to answer the question.


That the inhabitants of the English colonies in North-America, by the immutable laws of nature, the principles of the English constitution, and the several charters or compacts, have the following RIGHTS:

. . . That they are entitled to life, liberty and property: and they have never ceded to any foreign power whatever, a right to dispose of either without their consent.

—Declaration and Resolves of the First Continental Congress, 1774


In the Declaration of Independence, one of the rights listed in this excerpt was replaced with which of the following as an unalienable right?

Group of answer choices

rule by democracy

expression of ideas

pursuit of happiness

freedom to worship

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Answer:

rule by democracy

Explanation:

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Answer:

rule by democracy

Explaintion:
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