I'm not good at determining what is happening in a volleyball game. So if you can understand what I'm describing in this essay, the information I'm saying is relevant, and you actually understand how volleyball works, can you please tell me if this is good? Any negative comments are helpful.



The team's playing in this video are presented as Baylor Bears and Texas Longhorns. Baylor is #3 with a win to loss ratio of 11-2 for this season while Taylor is #1 with their unbeaten 11-0. Texas hit 294 as a team while Baylor hit 233, Texas Longhorns so far is the best hitting team efficiency wise in the country with a score of .359. Baylor took the lead in the first two sets when they made their first o2 comeback ever since Nov 1st of 2017. Hannah Sedwick, #14 Setter, in Baylor to me, seems like a really focused player, they mentioned how she was out for most of the season due to a fracture in her leg but yet she seems so active and awake, all of the players put in an effort but Hannah actually commits. When blocking the ball, her entire body became stiff and she carried the win for her team. On the other team there's Yossiana Pressley, #32 Outside Hitter, on the Baylor Bears who had 29 kills in the first part, and I have to say she completely dominated Baylor's with her spikes. Nilani Iosia, #12 Libero, in the Texas Longhorn scored 15 digs and an excellent passing percentage while Lauren Harrison, #31 Outside Hitter, Baylor Bears was the second leading attacker in the first part. Another notable player is Jhenna Gabriel, #2 setter, in Texas Longhorns who is the reigning national player of the big 12 player of the year.

The Texas Longhorns came through this game with a ratio of 3-2 remaining unbeaten for the 12th time in a row. In one play I remember Butler barely hit the ball over the net and scored. It wasn't such a critical play but it had strategy and reasoning behind it. While Baylor prepared for the worst by upgrading the offense, they left their defense bare. That's why I think it was smart how Butler quickly noticed that and surprised them. This team had a quick dynamic where they would hit the ball before the blockers could completely cover over the net. Somewhere in the beginning, I immediately had a feeling Taylors had something the Bears didn’t which helped them stay unbeaten. I’d say it’s how they made sure to make their hits clear so that it can go through the blockers, and they were very efficient with passing the ball to their hitters. They should’ve had a clearer touch with the ball as well even if they won, it looked like both teams couldn’t block the ball most of the time.

The losing team, Baylor Bears, was honestly close to Texas's score. I couldn't stop focusing on Yossiana Pressley in Baylor, she had perfect momentum and sharp reflexes. Not just because of her kills but I'd say she was the MVP player of this game. The team was always so supportive as well especially whenever a small mistake occurred like a foul for going over the line on a serve. I have to admit, most of their sets were average, and not to mention how their hitters would constantly hit out of the court. It seemed as if they were trying to get it to hit the net so Taylor's would have more difficulty blocking it, if that's the case then it's a very smart move, but otherwise, if they just happened to be lucky then I'd consider it a miracle. This team could always track the ball but when it came to controlling the ball, they were late and had bad momentum. The sad part is, the Baylor Bears are such a good team, I personally liked them more in the beginning where I saw more action, but whenever it came down to the ball constantly being passed back and forth it seemed as if they lost energy which to me, ultimately led to the downfall of their team.

Thank you :)

Answer:

I think the essay Is perfectly fine, I have read  through it multiple times and I think it is very well worded.

Explanation:

In a paragraph, discuss how the character trait of determination in Jerry in "Through the Tunnel" advances the plot of the short story.​

When Bob lights his cigar, his face is illuminated and his physical features are carefully described, in particular a white scar above his eyebrow. Why is the white scar important?

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Paragraph 20 reveals that the father views his childhood home of Ashland as —



a.a place of tremendous comfort
b.the best place to raise a family
c.a place with limited opportunities
d.a place of haunting memories

Which sentence states the central idea of the passage?
Tailors repair people's clothes or make new clothes for people. But the profession of tailoring may be dying out. Instead of going to a tailor, most people today just buy new clothes at the store when their old clothes wear out. Furthermore, not many young people are learning the skills needed to work as a tailor. If this trend does not change, professional tailors may soon only be a memory
O A. Tailoring is no longer necessary, because it is now easy for people to buy new clothes in stores rather than repairing old clothes
O B. Many professions that used to provide good jobs are now dying out due to changes in technology and people's lifestyles.
O c Tailoring may be dying out due to changes in people's clothing habits and career choices
O D Becoming a tailor could be a great idea for a young person who likes to make things and has a good sense of fashion.​

In Act II, scene ii, lines 604-05, Hamlet faults himself for lacking— the understanding that he has been wronged. the fortitude to seek revenge. the desire to harm others. bitterness against his enemies. an opportunity to avenge his father's death.

As your boss ushers you into his office and closes the door, you're experiencing a full-blown episode of the fight or flight
response. But since you can't fight and you can't flee, all of that energy is pent-up inside of you with no place to go. You feel like
you're going to explode. Your boss begins to speak. "Here it comes," you think to yourself. But you're so shocked by what you
hear you can't believe you heard it right. "What did you say?" you ask your boss. "We are considering you for a promotion," he
repeats.
Which term is a related word of flight as it is used in this passage?
A)
aviation
B)
escape
formation
D)
meeting

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How has being a first-generation American impacted Corina's
life? Use examples from the text to support your answer.

You can easily see the difference between the way they deal with Margot and the way they deal with me. For example, Margot broke the vacuum cleaner, and because of that we've been without light for the rest of the day. Mother said, “Well, Margot, it’s easy to see you’re not used to working; otherwise, you’d have known better than to yank the plug out by the cord.” Margot made some reply, and that was the end of the story. —The Diary of a Young Girl, Anne Frank Read the diary entries and use the drop-down menus to answer the questions. How does Mother’s reaction to Margot’s mistake sound? How would Anne describe her mother’s treatment of her as compared to her treatment of Margot?

Which transition word is also used to indicate a summary?
also
lastly
after
instead

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What is a FATt sentence for John F. Kennedys inaugural address?

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Read this sentence from the text:

The ground had a light dusting of white sand over an under layer of dried black mud. It looked like a recently frosted chocolate cake, though the frosting was spread a bit thin for my taste.

Which of the following best explains the phrase like a recently frosted chocolate cake?
A.
The dark mud showed through the light white sand.
B.
The dark mud was spongy like a warm, fresh cake.
C.
The dark mud had a sweet quality like frosting.
D.
The dark mud held their footsteps like frosting would.

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HELP PLEASE!!!!! Which poetic elements help performers memorize an epic poem? Check all that apply.


rhyme

description

lists of events

rhythm

repetition

in the course of the next few weeks jem and scout once again began to find treasures in the knothole. which of the items below was NOT found in the knothole?

a- two soap carvings
b- an old spelling medal
c- two Mr Goodbar candy bars
d- a gray ball of twine

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An excerpt of a business cover letter. The font is cursive and colored and the background is of water droplets.

List a minimum of four changes that need to be made to this electronic cover letter before sending it to a potential employer.

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a. to affect
b. affects
c. affected
d. will be affected​