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Which of these is the best revision of the sentence??

HELP Which Of These Is The Best Revision Of The Sentence??

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Answer 1

Answer:

I believe it's the bottom answer.

Answer 2
The bottom one is the answer

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Use the excerpt below to answer the question.


That the inhabitants of the English colonies in North-America, by the immutable laws of nature, the principles of the English constitution, and the several charters or compacts, have the following RIGHTS:

. . . That they are entitled to life, liberty and property: and they have never ceded to any foreign power whatever, a right to dispose of either without their consent.

—Declaration and Resolves of the First Continental Congress, 1774


In the Declaration of Independence, one of the rights listed in this excerpt was replaced with which of the following as an unalienable right?

Group of answer choices

rule by democracy

expression of ideas

pursuit of happiness

freedom to worship

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Answer:

rule by democracy

Explanation:

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Answer:

rule by democracy

Explaintion:

someone please help me

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Explanation:

epic 426

non epic 153 hope this will help you

what did u get for the answer??

need this rigth now plz help

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Answer:

c

Explanation:

because no where in the paragraph does it say that ALL junior college students choose to also go to a regular college, and the whole point of this paragraph is to tell the reader that it many people decide to go to a junior college first, because it’s cheaper. hope this helped

i think the answer is c

which of these would not be included in the index? A. main headings B. page numbers C. definitions D. subheadings

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Answer:

C. definitions

Explanation:

Option C

Answer:

C

Explanation:

What is the most important section in the importance of being earnest book? (1 page only)

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Pretty sure this question had already been asked by someone else

Answer:

the whole page

Explanation:

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i relly need help

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Answer:

b

Explanation:

Answer:

D is the answer

Explanation:

D is the most respectful and efficient response to this.

Please give me brainliest if I helped!

Which of these best describes how to reduce wordiness in this sentence??

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I’d choose the last one but it may not be correct.

The first one because the sentence has no need to know about when it was after New Years because you start your new year resolution after the New Years

What point of view does Emily Brontë use in this excerpt from the novel Wuthering Heights?


In all England, I do not believe that I could have fixed on a situation so completely removed from the stir of society. A perfect misanthropist’s heaven: and Mr. Heathcliff and I are such a suitable pair to divide the desolation between us. A capital fellow! He little imagined how my heart warmed towards him when I beheld his black eyes withdraw so suspiciously under their brows, as I rode up, and when his fingers sheltered themselves, with a jealous resolution, still further in his waistcoat, as I announced my name.



A.
first-person point of view
B.
second-person point of view
C.
third-person limited point of view
D.
third-person omniscient point of view

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First person view.You can tell because she’s using words like “I” that shows that she is speaking from her own point of view.
A.
First person point of view Bc it says “I”

Civil Disobedience

Part 1

Most people remember Gandhi and Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. as reformers who practiced non-violent forms of protest and advocacy. Both effectively changed the popular opinion about emotional issues for their countries and brought in a wave of change that was long overdue. But the practice of non-violent protest, or civil disobedience, started long before either Gandhi or King. It began with a quiet, shy poet who is best known for writing a lot about a pond.

Henry David Thoreau lived from 1817 until 1862, mainly in the area of Concord, Massachusetts. The issue that would tear the country apart in the 1860s had already begun dividing the nation. Thoreau was only 14 when Nat Turner led the slave rebellion in Virginia and was later hanged. In his late 20s, Thoreau began speaking against slavery in public, echoing the voices of freedmen like Frederick Douglass and Lewis Hayden.

Thoreau believed that a government that supported slavery was corrupt and immoral. He was also deeply suspicious of government. For these and other reasons, Thoreau refused to pay his poll tax for a number of years. The poll tax was a legal tax owed by every person. It was basically a tax on one's body. After not paying for years, he was at last arrested. He spent only one night in jail, however, as a relative paid the tax for him. He was reportedly furious that any tax was paid on his behalf.

It was this experience that Thoreau wrote about in an essay called "Civil Disobedience." In this essay, he argued that being moral and just came before allegiance to government. He wrote “If the machine of government is of such a nature that it requires you to be the agent of injustice to another, then, I say, break the law." He also felt that voting was not enough to ensure that the right thing be done. He wrote that "even voting for the right is doing nothing for it… A wise man will not leave the right to the mercy of chance…" He felt that one had a moral responsibility to resist unjust laws.

What does the author show in the story of Thoreau going to jail?

How Thoreau protested
How angry Thoreau was
That few people protested
He was influential

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Answer:

Thoreau protested laws that he believed were unfair.

Explanation:

WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST IF RIGHT
Nights and Dragons— From the memoir of author Abigail Prynne I could have given up, but I thought about my grandmother. She always told me that "people who believe that science is the answer to everything are missing out on everything else." With her words in mind, I searched some more. There were many facts that hinted that dragons may not be fictional. I noticed that cultures across the world all described dragons in similar ways. This was odd because they had no way to communicate with each other. I found dragons mentioned in more than just stories. They appeared in old legal papers, in the travel logs of Marco Polo, and in the Bible. I saw that the Chinese calendar uses a different animal each year. Dragons are included along with eleven real animals. I began to believe it was a real possibility that all of these people were talking about a creature that actually existed. The text discusses the Chinese calendar by writing, "Dragons are included along with eleven real animals." What does that imply?
(A. Dragons are the only fake animal on the Chinese calendar.
(B. Dragons are not the only fake animal on the Chinese calendar.
(C. Dragons are real because all the other animals on the calendar are fake.
(D. Dragons are real because all the other animals on the calendar are real.

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Answer:

Well i guess dragons are the only fake animal on the Chinese calendar because we only mostly heard about dragon's in paper and other then that

SORRY IF IS WRONG I JUST TRIED MY BEST, HAVE A GREAT DAY :)
d- dragons are real Bc all other animals on the calendar are real.

Civil Disobedience

Part 2:

Thoreau’s ideas had a profound effect on a man named Gandhi. Gandhi, was a leader in India who worked to end British rule. He led India to independence and inspired many to non-violent forms of protest and resistance. He fought to end poverty, worked to expand women's right to vote, and built bridges between ethnic and religious groups. Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet. In India, Gandhi's form of protest was called the "non-cooperation movement." He urged Indians to boycott British education systems and leave government jobs. The movement was very popular, and in part to stop its spread, the British controlled government arrested him. After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again. He inspired many to follow him on marches to protest various taxes. On one such march, thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax. This march set the example of non-violent resistance to the government that others in the country followed. Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.

Gandhi's model of resistance and reform was creative, appealing, and successful. As a result, Dr. Martin Luther King looked to Gandhi when the time came to find a way to resist segregation in the South. The lunch counter protests, famous for the passive response to anger, and even violence, aimed to end the separation enforced by laws in some regions of the South. King also organized walks, marches, and bus rides that were meant to bring attention to the issues facing African Americans. These forms of protest were directly modeled on Gandhi's, but King took them straight to the source of oppression. Where Gandhi's protests created awareness and built momentum, King's protests were in the face of great hatred and fear. The passive, non-violent protests were ultimately effective, mainly because the passive response to violence cast the opposition as brutes. However, change came slowly and at the cost of many lives. King remained committed to peaceful protest, however, until his death. King learned from Gandhi, expanding on what worked, applying old techniques to a new problem. Gandhi owed his philosophy, in part, to a New England poet who loved the woods.

Based on the bolded paragraph, which line shows the success of Gandhi work?

Eventually India won independence from Britain, in large part because of Gandhi work.
After a few years, he was released and became active in politics again.
… thousands followed him 240 miles over 24 days to the sea to protest a salt tax.
Like Thoreau, he lived simply, owned very little, and ate a vegetarian diet.

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Answer:

Yes mate it does

Explanation:

Answer:

d

Explanation:

i did the text

What have you learn from this? 3-5 sentences please

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Although constantly faced with racism and discrimination, Paul Laurence Dunbar grew up to become an inspiring poet. This man faced adversity and wrote about his experiences as insight so all could understand his journey . To this day, Dunbar’s work is widely recognized and quoted and he is seen as one of the first nationally acclaimed African American poets.

Answer:

that i used this app in 6th

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Hey…. I just need some advice. So I suck at math right like I dont know anything, or I should say I dont remember anything! So a little bit over the summer I have been doing Khan acadamey and what not. But I still cant seem to do anything right! So school here starts september 1st and Im gonna be a freshman in highschool. What do I do!!!

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Well just relax everything will be ok. I was nervous as a freshman as well and struggled but your teacher will always be there for you, just keep on studying and when school starts don’t be afraid to raise your hand or ask for help when needed because they won’t know if you’re struggling. Personally in my high school my teachers offered tutoring after school. Don’t stress and break ur head just enjoy ur break and wait until school starts cause i’m pretty sure not everyone is gonna remember anything as well. They take it little by little and it’s pretty easy.

study some in any way possible and talk to your parents abt it, be confident and be yourself and that way ppl will like you.

Read the paragraph. Then answer the question that follows.

Perhaps you wanted pizza for dinner, but were out voted by the rest of the family who wanted chili. This is similar to what happens in a community. One person has to give up a right for the good of the group. Sometimes citizens' duties and rights conflict with each other. A good example is a public protest. People have the right to meet in groups and share ideas. However, a protest can disrupt traffic or other normal activities. A city must provide extra police protection to keep people safe. Therefore, the city has the right to require permission in advance for a protest. Government must make laws to balance the rights of individuals and different groups of people.

Which of the following statements best describes this paragraph?

The paragraph contains categories of comparison.
The paragraph contains a simile.
The paragraph contains no text connections.
The paragraph contains an analogy.

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I just woke you so much lol lol I’m bout to go get home and now I need some money to do my hair and then
um, i think the answer is “the paragraph contains a comparison

Fahrenheit 451 HELP!
symbol, metaphor, simile, allusion, and foreshadowing.
(Give examples and page numbers!)

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Answer: easy peasy

Explanation: G O O G L E is the best answer

Figurative Language

Connotations: Snake (literal animal), connotation is the negative (snake-not very loyal with a negative connotation). Think about a positive, negative or neutral connotation.

Simile: Uses like, as, than, or resembles.
Ex: Her hair bounced like a spring.

Metaphor: A comparison between two unlike things without using the words like or as.
Ex: Her eyes shot moon beams into me.

Personification: Giving human-like qualities to inanimate objects.
Ex: The wind whispered warnings to turn back.

Imagery: Descriptive language that appeals to the five senses— needs either sight, sound, smell, touch, taste.
Ex: Light, foamy clouds tickled the crisp, blue sky.

Symbolism: When something is used to represent a deeper meaning.
Ex: It is now his darkest hour
Or
He bled Stars and Stripes.

One of the girls brought some candy for you.

The prepositional phrase(s) is/are _____.

brought some candy
for you
of the girls
some candy
one of the girls

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Answer:

for you

Explanation:

A prepositional phrase is a group of words consisting of a preposition, its object, and any words that modify the object.

Answer:

for you

Explanation:

Is page 1 of the importance of being earnest the most important section of the book?


Scene: Morning-room in ALGERNON'S flat in Half Moon Street
The room is luxuriously and artistically furnished. The
sound of a piano is heard in the adjoining room. LANE is
arranging afternoon tea on the table, and after the music has
ceased, ALGERNON enters.
ALGERNON. Did you hear what I was playing, Lane?
LANE. I didn't think it polite to listen, sir.
ALGERNON. I'm sorry for that, for your sake. I don't
play accurately — any one can play accurately — but I
play with a wonderful expression. As far as the piano is
concerned, sentiment is my forte. I keep science for
Life.
LANE. Yes, sir.
ALGERNON. And, speaking of the science of Life, have

you got the cucumber sandwiches cut for Lady Bracknell?

LANE. Yes, sir. (Hands them on a salver.)
ALGERNON. (Inspects them, takes two, and sits down on the
sofa.) Oh! ... by the way, Lane, I see from your book that
on Thursday night when Lord Shoreman and Mr. Worthing were dining with me, eight bottles of champagne are entered as having been consumed.

LANE.
Yes, sir; eight bottles and a pint.

ALGERNON.
Why is it that at a bachelor’s establishment the servants invariably drink the champagne? I ask merely for information.

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Answer:

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Answer:

Because it represents symbolism of the build up of each character, the first page gives the reader an idea of what kind of scenario is going on, along with character development with the novel.

Explanation:

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